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Shimmering light,
Heart-thumping fright,
Audience watches the dazzling sight.

Colors blaze,
Stage hidden in misty haze,
Actors look about with dramatic gaze.

This feel,
This incredible zeal,
This love of something so very real.

Intent attention,
Still and gasping with the tension,
I play my part and await their reaction.

That pause,
Before the applause,
The momentary shock of delight is the cause.

Because, you see, acting is an art:
Art, not science – it takes talent.
So when people see that side of you
And like what they see – and really do –
That feeling of fulfillment in your heart,
Knowing that you did your part –
Did it well, to your director's content –
That is a gift: treasured, but never spent.

It's even better when you get no awards
Or even congratulations to your face;
No… it's much better when all you hear
Are the whispered rumors in your ear,
Saying you made an impression towards
People – with subtle daggers, not swords;
You were their child's favorite ace
And truly the best in the whole place!

And the thing that makes you come back
Isn't the makeup-caked face or sore feet;
It isn't the fawning of the costume crew
Or that joke you get but no one else knew.
No, what you come back for is that knack
For evoking laughter and making people crack,
Letting fall a tear or two in the backseat
For that dying heroine you made complete.

That feeling that no one but actors know
Is what makes stage fright worthwhile:
The satisfaction in evoking the right response
Is what we do it for; it's why we ensconce
The lines in our memory for the best show;
It's why we stay all night to get the flow
Of that scene just right (so it's not vile).
We do it 'cause we love it. 'Cause it makes us smile.
idk...I just felt like writing this.....I AM an actor (I've been in 3 productions) but I've never been that main character, only ever a supporting actor and for a long time it REALLY bothered me...until I heard from a few friends (that WERE main characters) that some people who had attended the shows had actually liked my characters best...
that knowledge and the feeling you get is truly something you can't understand unless you've experienced it....but I hope this poem attempted to explain at least=P tell me what ya think!
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EclecticQuill Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
I despise acting, for my own part... it always made me feel wrong footed. But I had a friend who loved being on stage... I think he'd have approved of this poem :)
As for me, I love it! The language is used to good effect, and you capture the theme quite well.
MistressofQuills Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you haha:D I absolutely love case you couldn't tell;P lol
EclecticQuill Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
No worries :) Aye, I got that impression lol Each to their own, I enjoy performance arts, but only as part of the audience :)
MistressofQuills Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
And that's amazing fun too:D I got to see Wicked for my birthday!!:woohoo: loooooove that show!!!
EclecticQuill Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
I've not seen it, but I've seen Les Mis, most of Shakespeare's plays, and a few other musicals who's names escape me. But aye, I love the theatre :)
MistressofQuills Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
It's the best:D ......well...other than writing:D haha they are my two greatest loves!
EclecticQuill Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
I wouldn't place it that high myself... but aye, it is great :)
MistressofQuills Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Well as you said, to each his own=P
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LivingInMyThoughts Dec 25, 2012
I love this. I've never really been in a real production, but I can still kinda relate, and I love it. The formatting, the style, the language, everything. :D
MistressofQuills Dec 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much for the feedback!
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