deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

More from *MistressofQuills


×
Eyes black and flinty,
He watches you in the night,
Stopping hearts with fright.

Where you don't expect,
Around every dark corner,
He waits to catch you.

Ghost who haunts your dreams,
Creature of whispered legend,
He is Slenderman.

93

10 47 0
I've only written a couple of haiku before, so I thought I'd give it another shot. I know, I know, Slenderman is such a cliche subject to write about, but it's an easy subject to start a new style with so don't judge me:tears: Anyway, tell me what you think!

Details

Stats

Submitted on
December 28, 2012
File Size
376 bytes
Views
93
Favourites
10 (who?)
Comments
47
URL
Thumb
Only verified accounts can report policy violations. Please check your email and click on the verification link.
* Required field
Add a Comment:
 

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:icongraveful:
*graveful Jan 4, 2013   General Artist
The ending really surprised me, actually. Slenderman has been ALL over the place and so I too was a little disappointed -- however it doesnt' change that it's written well. It's funny how such few words can create an emotional reaction! Very spooky. I thought it was about a stalker or somesuch. Good job. :)
Reply
:iconmistressofquills:
*MistressofQuills Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thank you very much:D
Reply
:iconartandmusic4life:
~artandmusic4life Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha so creepy XD well written tho!
Reply
:iconmistressofquills:
*MistressofQuills Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thanks:D
Reply
:icon98darkwolf94:
I've been turning to Haiku a lot recently since it's an easy and fun form of poetry to express yourself with. I have a few up in my gallery if you'd like to see them. :)
Reply
:iconmistressofquills:
*MistressofQuills Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Ok, I'll take a look:) thanks for commenting!
Reply
:iconlivinginmythoughts:
Ahaha!! I was thinking Slenderman all the way through the poem with a growing smile on my face, and when I saw "Slenderman" I laughed out loud. As great as this is, I can't take anything concerning Slenderman seriously anymore because of all the funny things I've mentally done with Slenderman. My friends and I decided he needs a girlfriend. XD

Oh, poor, lonely Slendy.
Reply
:iconmistressofquills:
*MistressofQuills Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Haha yes I know what you mean:XD: I knew I'd get a lot of comments about writing about him but I was trying out a new style of writing so I thought I'd choose an easy subject=P
Reply
:iconlivinginmythoughts:
Yeah. It's a good idea for practice, just... I can't give any critique or anything cause I can't stop laughing.
Reply
:iconmistressofquills:
*MistressofQuills Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Haha no worries:aww:
Reply
Add a Comment: