I've only written a couple of haiku before, so I thought I'd give it another shot. I know, I know, Slenderman is such a cliche subject to write about, but it's an easy subject to start a new style with so don't judge me Anyway, tell me what you think!
The ending really surprised me, actually. Slenderman has been ALL over the place and so I too was a little disappointed -- however it doesnt' change that it's written well. It's funny how such few words can create an emotional reaction! Very spooky. I thought it was about a stalker or somesuch. Good job.
Ahaha!! I was thinking Slenderman all the way through the poem with a growing smile on my face, and when I saw "Slenderman" I laughed out loud. As great as this is, I can't take anything concerning Slenderman seriously anymore because of all the funny things I've mentally done with Slenderman. My friends and I decided he needs a girlfriend. XD